the differences between us
you will always have the river
wide in the way a boy thinks is wide
quiet brown silted water
as distant as ancestral piazzas
and i will have mountains
not too tall
scalable but not by me
holding back clouds and lightning both
your river will take you back
to fond pleasant thoughts of youth
or ugly thoughts perhaps
or fear of what a boy never lost
and my mountains?
they were wilder than that
more potent in their expressions
still and erect and stagnant with grace
your river shames you for what you were
and what you cannot forget
but there was no shame in it when
it passed through pastures and lowlands
green hills and woodlands, wild flowers and wheat
and there was no shame in the mountains
at my feet late at nights
tar shine and moon light on my face
forearms, hands, lips, waist, skin
no shame in that
Saturday, November 27, 2004
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1 Comments:
Tara,
I would like to second dick jones' opinion of your poetry.
I am from the UK, also, and I appreciate this sort of poetry. Please keep your stuff flowing.
You work is being savoured from afar. It makes a change from all the other IBPC winners' slop, which I don't bother reading anymore. That's where predictable rubbish should be kept.
I do think you should be publishing this sort of poetry rather than giving it away free on your blog. You must be less altruistic and more entrepreneurial. Your keyboard is sitting on a fortune.
Celeste
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